Brotherhood- Bloodshed/Inter-Galactic Force

I know you guys are reviewing this already but i figured i should post it here :/ And some status as to where you are at reviewing would be nice.

Bloodshed/Inter Galactic Force Brotherhood

   This brotherhood is designed to create an official peace agreement between Bloodshed and Inter-Galactic Force, the two most powerful alliances in the Star Wars universe.
   Some key points are as follows:
•   In the event of a war, either ally will support the other.
•   Members will interact on forums and better get to know one another, essential in good relations with allies.
•   Members of the brotherhood WILL be encouraged to farm each other. Credits are best stolen from allies rather than enemies.

With the two most powerful alliances combining forces, those beneath us will not be able to resist. Those who wish to join will benefit if they are active. One outcome of this brotherhood will be that other alliances will want to join.
Here is the rule that we follow when dealing with another alliance: Either the alliance in question merges with us (all active and decently powerful players join), or becomes a protectorate (in which the alliance must pay fees of credits and population to us to stay as one. In return we offer protection). We may target certain well organized alliances.
   In the event of a war outside the brotherhood, IGF and Bloodshed may well interfere, as is every alliances right. However, if they do, the alliance they helped will be asked to choose one of the following options above, or at least repay some of the losses we suffered.
   This brotherhood will bring great power to us. It would be very beneficial in all manners, military, economic, and even social.

Note: No disrespect is meant to Inter-Galactic Force when their name is abbreviated. I intended to do the same to bloodshed, but whenever I saw an alliance named BS I couldn’t help laughing. (bullshit)